Pain

The blade slides slowly .
New wounds arise .
Each slice for every promise you broke .
Each mark for every memory you took .

The pain fills me now .
My heart has gone hollow
All because I couldnt follow
Each new step you took .

Now I cry in vain
And hoping to ease the pain ,
I bring the blade back down
Trying to distract my mind ,
Desperatley trying to make you hide .

But my heart won't let you go
My mind can't forget
And untill I finally can ,
This pain will have to remain .


Poem I wrote outside of class , comments ?

Rape

Ok soo this is a topic that makes me SOOO mad >.> my friend told me this story a while ago about a girl on her prom night .... She was leaving the dance through the back of the school to the parking lot , when a whole bunch of guys ( idk how many ) ages ranging 17-37 gang raped her . The worst part is yet to come . A group of about 20 people surrounded her and the men and WATCHED . Some even taking PICTURES and VIDEOS . They were her friends !!!!!!!!!!!! NO ONE bothered to help her besides one young boy who saw it and ran to his mom . I don't know if they were convicted or anything but BOYYYY I hope they were . It makes me sick to my stomach thinking that guys do this to women . The rape of Nanjing is another one that pisses me off . The Japanese invaded Nanjing and separated the men and women , they raped all the women , and brought the men to firing ranges to kill . They raped and slaughtered men , women , and CHILDREN . This makes me so angry you have no idea . The poor girl must be feeling that everyone hates her since all of her friends watched and took pictures and crap . The women in Nanjing ? I hope their lives got better for this is HORRIBLE . NOBODY has the right to demoralize , embarrass m and hurt someone like that . NOBODY . In ancient Greece they'd smash a rapists penis in between two big stones . HA they should do that today . There would be wayyyy less rape and molestation . And its good payback . You defile and hurt us ? YOU get defiled and hurt . So comment with opinion's , story's , comments , anything . And if I ever meet someone who raped or molested anyone , I will personally cut off their genitals XD :3

No title for this one

Another poem I wrote in class ....


His eyes aren't ordinary eyes ,
They're hypnotic , liquid pools of color .
Sometimes a shiny emerald greed ,
Sometimes a stormy ocean clue .
Those eyes show his emotions ,
Hard and flinty as steel ,
Or warm and flowing with love .
Not very clear
But more beautiful than jade ,
And more mesmerizing than aquamarine .

His eyes bring his soul to view ,
And tell me things more powerful than words .
I find comfort in those crystallized jewels ,
They promise peace and protection .
As welcoming as home ,
Safer than mothers arms .
Those eyes smile down at me ,
The world fly's away ,
And my heart melts .



NO its not about a person lololol . Comment with opinions/tips/etcc.

Lightening

Another poem I wrote in class :

Electric blue strikes
Silently scorching small objects in its sight
Hatching any designs it likes
With big bolts of luminous light .

Amazing illuminations
Can make you come loose
Or inspire new creations
For the mighty Zeus .

The electricity crackles ,
The black sky grows bright ,
Then it fades into speckles ,
And disappears into the night .

With lightening comes thunder ,
With thunder comes sound .
It can make you blunder ,
As your heart becomes fear-bound .

Lightening can be beautiful .
There is beauty in dangerous ,
But overall it's plentiful
In its strength and courageousness .




Any ways to make it better ? I really like this one . Comment with opinions and stufffffffs

Daydreams

So I'm in a creative writing class , and we did a poetry unit . I also write poems outside of the class , so I'm going to post stories/poems that I wrote in the class and out of it :3 heres on I wrote in the class , its a definition poem :


What is a daydream ?


A daydream is like a movie in your head .
It's a wishful wooshing that encases your mind .
You're the director of this exciting journey.
As the day dream plays behind your eyes ,
The next scene becomes your new longing .

A daydream is a way to escape .
It's your own personal hideout .
A daydream is a way to comfort .
Mourning or raving ,
A daydream is the savior .
A distraction from reality ,
And all its daily drama .



A daydream is
Whatever you desire it to be .

To be honest , I don't really like this one . But comment with opinions and ways to edit it ? :D

Gays/Lesbians/Bis

K soo a few weeks ago it was National Day of silence at my school . I , of course , participated . I wore tape on my mouth and didn't talk allllll day . VERY hard if you know me :3 lol but anyways , Many people made fun of me and called me gay . I am not gay . I support gay rights , and think they deserve to be treated the same as everyone else . I don't know if this is true , but they say it's been scientifically proven that being gay is not a choice . Theres a gland in your brain that decides your attractions ( can someone find the name of it for me ? ) and thay say in gays/lesbians/bis that the gland is bigger . So it isn't a choice and they are still humans . They deserve to get married , donate blood , be treated RIGHT . I have many gay friends , and they're not any different then my straight friends . Oh , another thing that annoys me . Just cuz a girl is a lesbian does not mean she is going to hit on you . Girls don't hit on every guy they see . Same for gay boys . Guys don't hit on every girl they see , and gay guys don't hit on every guy they see . So for all of you who are homophobic and think they're creepy and gross and will hit on you , you're wrong . They're HUMANS . Sooooo treat them like humans . This topic makes me very very very angry ( as you can tell ) since alot of my friends have depression because they're gay and get rigiculed and made fun of and loose jobs and friends because of it . Treat them how you want to be treated .

Life after death

So me and some friends got into a small discussion on what happens to us after death . This is my opinion on it :3 I think once we die we are reincarnated . I mean if you think about it ... have you ever had strong de ja vu ? But you know you've never been/saw/heard/etc. whatever it is your de ja vu-ing about ? I think its because we've experienced it in a past life . Also , you know how you're 'naturally gifted' at something ? I beleive its cuz we had past lives and did those things , so in this life we already know how but people just think its something we're naturally gifted with , or we're a very fast learner . It kinda makes sense though ... how else would we know all of these things about our past ? Like my friend is not spanish AT ALL yet she learned it do fast and speaks it so fluently that you would think she HAS to be spanish . I think its because in one of her former lives she spoke spanish :3 so , thats all I have to say on that topic .... feel free to comment with your beliefs on life after death , comments on my idea , or anything XD

XD

Okiii Dokiii so I just made this blog , and I don't know what you're suppposed to put on it , but I'm just going to post poems I wrote :3 my beleifs on some things :3 and other random stuff . Feel free to comment them with ur ideas and stuffs XD sooo .... yea .... lol