Pain

The blade slides slowly .
New wounds arise .
Each slice for every promise you broke .
Each mark for every memory you took .

The pain fills me now .
My heart has gone hollow
All because I couldnt follow
Each new step you took .

Now I cry in vain
And hoping to ease the pain ,
I bring the blade back down
Trying to distract my mind ,
Desperatley trying to make you hide .

But my heart won't let you go
My mind can't forget
And untill I finally can ,
This pain will have to remain .


Poem I wrote outside of class , comments ?