Another poem I wrote in class ....
His eyes aren't ordinary eyes ,
They're hypnotic , liquid pools of color .
Sometimes a shiny emerald greed ,
Sometimes a stormy ocean clue .
Those eyes show his emotions ,
Hard and flinty as steel ,
Or warm and flowing with love .
Not very clear
But more beautiful than jade ,
And more mesmerizing than aquamarine .
His eyes bring his soul to view ,
And tell me things more powerful than words .
I find comfort in those crystallized jewels ,
They promise peace and protection .
As welcoming as home ,
Safer than mothers arms .
Those eyes smile down at me ,
The world fly's away ,
And my heart melts .
NO its not about a person lololol . Comment with opinions/tips/etcc.
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I'm digging the use of enjambement there :)*runs*
ReplyDeleteThe use of whatt ?
ReplyDeleteRun on lines XD
ReplyDeletePSHH thanks for the compliment u jerk !! :''''(
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